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Somewhere in the distant future,
(Bearing in mind the fluctuation of relativity)
We will stumble into a time of not so subtle torments.
Amidst the debris of urban decay
And desolate wastelands
Countless shattered souls will wander.
Disconnected from themselves by impersonal technologies and personal cause…

Yesterday…
A prophetic dream that we were soldiers in a war.
We wear a uniform,
But do not know who the adversary is
Or even what side we are fighting for.
Walking these empty streets,
Gun in hand,
Looking for anyone at all…
In a shadowed stairwell we meet a faceless warrior
He does not speak.
Just a creature, seeking sanctuary, sustenance, and love…
Together, all beneath a solitary swinging bulb;
This dream, Lucid,
Forces us into an alarming tailspin.
Feeling truly alone.
Each in our own individual, divided world.

All of the things that gave us strength,
Focus,
Meaning,
And identity
Are gone.
I face my own doubts and mortality for the first time…
Begin to walk by myself at dawn
Through the waking streets.
Gradually I discover an inner peace within our spirit…
You begin to forgive and accept these things,
And understand that this desire,
Desire to find perfection above humanity,
Leads to things that I didn’t really want or need…
Begin to love and empathise with others
Compassion, without fear of consequence,
And so, in this solitude, realize that you were never really alone at all…

Somewhere in the distant future,
We may well find a world of not so subtle torments.
Eased by disconnecting ourselves with impersonal technologies and personal cause
©2006-2009 ~daliesque
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Author's Comments

I wrote this poem recently and finished it in one day of non-stop writing. It's inspired from the dream which is written about and describes my personal beliefs on the future and is partially to do with religion - if u can read deeply enough into it to understand.

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:iconmeslugwiththorn:
wooaahhhh I like very much... why did we waste so much time doing cartoons of cowgirl when we could have been writing combined philosophical literature about her??

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You're even more beautiful than I remember you being...
And if the world ends, I hope you're here with me
:icondaliesque:
that could have seriously messed with her mind. hehe - can u imagine!!!!

''cola! anie! stop sending each other notes!!!! pass it here!!!!''
''ok, cowgirl. i mean i mean, ok miss'' *pass note to front*
*stunned silence* ''wtf...?''

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:iconmeslugwiththorn:
XD XD XD XD XD

That would actually have been possibly even more fun than when Tinnyboy punished me by letting me sit on his swivelly chair. Maybe she would have done the same.

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You're even more beautiful than I remember you being...
And if the world ends, I hope you're here with me
:icondaliesque:
:omfg: i'd completely 4gotten abt that?!?!?! LMAO!!!!! what a foolish foolish woman

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:iconmeslugwiththorn:
So had I until today XD hahahaha that was so hilarious. And the only reason I wasn't doing the essay in the first place was because I'd already done it at home... fantastic hahaha

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You're even more beautiful than I remember you being...
And if the world ends, I hope you're here with me
:icondaliesque:
oh god.....lord high priest....who can 4got the lord high priest...? *sigh* we were very strange. rofl. we should go bak 4 a reunion some time - i wonder if he's still there?

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:iconmeslugwiththorn:
Ohhh my XD We made offerings to a post.. WE ACTUALLY MADE OFFERINGS TO A POST...

How cool...

He has to still be there! HE JUST HAS TO! I visited him not so long ago I think... I wonder if any of our offerings are still there hahaha we destroyed so many gardens for that post XD

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You're even more beautiful than I remember you being...
And if the world ends, I hope you're here with me
:icondaliesque:
A POST!!!!! blasphemy!!! u must call him by his correct name!!!!! :rofl: hehe

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oh yes XD Forgive me, Lord High Priest, for I have sinned :(

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You're even more beautiful than I remember you being...
And if the world ends, I hope you're here with me

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